Newlands creative writing competition

In my school we had a writinng competition that consited in writing a story with a fragment given in one piece of paper. My language teacher, Andrea Sheckster make us re write and ilustrated with images.

Instructions: Choose one of the following subjects to write about.

Intermediate

1) Write a story which contains this:

"I will never forget that day"

2) How did he dare do that to me?

3) We should be more concerned about the dangers of social networking.

I choose number 1.

   "I will never forget that day". It was a wonderful day like all the others in Barcelona beaches. I was swimming in the Atlantic Ocean with my sister and my parents.when something happened. We saw an enormus whale coming to us. My family got excited as they had never seen a whale before and they got annoyed. Nevertheless, I got very scared since the shape of that whale was amazing.
   My family started getting near to that animal and I was paralised without moving. I didn´t realise but my sister started calling me to go where they were and I couldn´t move until I realise that the whale had started moving to where I was. I got frightened and I started swimming to the shore the fastest I could. In spite of my pathetic efforts were useless since the whale got to my position in less than ten seconds.
   When the whale was next to me I broke out in a cry as I was very scared of that monster. I was so scared that I couldn´t realise that they were my two cousins in a costume trying to scare me and they did it. All my family laughed at me. That was the most ridiculos day in my whole life.

NOW, CLICK ON THE WHALE AND SEE!!!!!!

We are what we wear

In our language and use of english class we have seen a movie called "The Devil wears proda" with this story we made a literary essey. In this essey we have to include six conectors, one rethorical question and two metaphors or similies.

In my opion it is important who we dress as it can makes you an important person or not. However, does fashion is important? A lot of people spend a lot of money in new fashion things like a new jacket for example. From my point of view this is not important.
Other thing is that if we buy all the new things that deseiners make we are using a lot of money that can be use for other thing. Althought fashion have good parts like for example women can be as pretty as they want to be. Furthermore fashion is diferent depending the age, if you are men or women, etc. Because of this people play a lot of atention to what they put on.
To conclude my opinion is that for society we are what we wear. If they don´t like it you are exclude of it and if they like it you are include.

 Before starting we did this spider map about the three main characters of the story.

Wild life story

In the class of Language our teacher ask us to read an articke of wild life and then create a story starting or ending with this phrase: " What an amaizing day!" Max whispered to himself as he got into bed last night."
Also the story have to contain five collocations, three phrasal verbs, five word formation, three bad weather conditions, four others words or phtases and five conectors.

"What an amaizing day!" Max whispered to himself as he got into bed last night."
That day he had a very exciting day in the forest with a wild animal, a tiger. He was alone in the forest running out of water because of the drought that the forest was suffering, he was thinking of giving up and turn down into the floor when he saw somehing magnificent. There were a lot of men doing iligal logging damaging the habitat of a poor tiger. He started thinking how a person could be so cruel with wildlife, that was something very irresponsable and illogical. Also he saw that they even didn´t try to preserve the trees putting others when they cut rhem. Even do they are not thinking of the consequences like soil erotion. Fortunately a heavy storm came and they have to pospone their impolite work. Instantly when the inexperience men went away he saw the tiger hunting a snake and trying to get at a place to sleep. In the morning when he stood up he saw the disastrous thing that the storm had make. It was like if a huricane have pass. But also he see a good part of that, that the tiger had eaten a delicious fox