We are what we wear

In our language and use of english class we have seen a movie called "The Devil wears proda" with this story we made a literary essey. In this essey we have to include six conectors, one rethorical question and two metaphors or similies.

In my opion it is important who we dress as it can makes you an important person or not. However, does fashion is important? A lot of people spend a lot of money in new fashion things like a new jacket for example. From my point of view this is not important.
Other thing is that if we buy all the new things that deseiners make we are using a lot of money that can be use for other thing. Althought fashion have good parts like for example women can be as pretty as they want to be. Furthermore fashion is diferent depending the age, if you are men or women, etc. Because of this people play a lot of atention to what they put on.
To conclude my opinion is that for society we are what we wear. If they don´t like it you are exclude of it and if they like it you are include.

 Before starting we did this spider map about the three main characters of the story.